tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30484615.post5503128519983108501..comments2023-05-15T05:54:39.374-05:00Comments on aMUSEings: Imagination Indulge #2Rachhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09791351711056663599noreply@blogger.comBlogger11125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30484615.post-43337249965656612622008-03-13T01:51:00.000-05:002008-03-13T01:51:00.000-05:00Clap Clap :)AravindClap Clap :)<BR/><BR/>AravindAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30484615.post-51305059171414984042008-03-12T03:53:00.000-05:002008-03-12T03:53:00.000-05:00:) Thanks !:) Thanks !Rachhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09791351711056663599noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30484615.post-66421190839911272272008-03-12T02:45:00.000-05:002008-03-12T02:45:00.000-05:00No words to appreciate....I am dumbstruck !!It is ...No words to appreciate....<BR/>I am dumbstruck !!<BR/>It is nice and I really liked the pondering....<BR/>:)AjAyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17664846643089402614noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30484615.post-76566944364516086002008-03-10T05:46:00.000-05:002008-03-10T05:46:00.000-05:00@Piyush: Oh not always, and probably not after mar...@Piyush: Oh not always, and probably not after marriage :)<BR/><BR/>@The Mad Hatter: Hurrah! :) ..for the bouquets. Brickbats - I must admit I felt so too, but as I said, really got carried away :) I was so involved in the content, I guess I slipped on presentation. <BR/>There be more chances.. :) I'll be back.Rachhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09791351711056663599noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30484615.post-71762585467636714342008-03-10T05:27:00.000-05:002008-03-10T05:27:00.000-05:00Why not.. I am sure guys would react that way :)Why not.. I am sure guys would react that way :)Piyush Sethiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05915181236768472477noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30484615.post-6496238437348581452008-03-10T05:25:00.000-05:002008-03-10T05:25:00.000-05:00You never cease to amaze! Bravo, Ole, etc. etc. :)...You never cease to amaze! Bravo, Ole, etc. etc. :)<BR/><BR/>Bouquets: 8/10 for character, for both "her" and "him". Both characters are real with some depth. Perhaps ever so mildly stereotyped, but that's not too bad at all. Bonus points for humanizing the creep. Double bonus points for the subtlety in the "Mahesh" angle. <BR/><BR/>Brickbats: 5/10 for writing. The writing is so unlike you - too ponderous where fewer bolder strokes would've been better. Missing is the light felicity of your prose (except in the Mahesh part, where leave a lot unsaid, with great effect). Perhaps it's because you empathize with "her" more? :) But then, even the "her" part was a bit ponderous.The Mad Hatterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08343773205779641652noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30484615.post-27131279558710558012008-03-10T01:57:00.000-05:002008-03-10T01:57:00.000-05:00:D What I mean is that it was real fun to write th...:D What I mean is that it was real fun to write this piece... There has to be some sadness if I follow from the previous post right ? I didn't want the guy to be all "Hurrah ! She's gone !" ;)Rachhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09791351711056663599noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30484615.post-20788301347359245642008-03-10T01:54:00.000-05:002008-03-10T01:54:00.000-05:00Rach : I just got very (gleefully) carried away.Pi...Rach : I just got very (gleefully) carried away.<BR/><BR/>Piyush : Gleefully??? Really?? Nice post, but why is there so much underlying sadness!!!Piyush Sethiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05915181236768472477noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30484615.post-37452055619287469602008-03-10T00:30:00.000-05:002008-03-10T00:30:00.000-05:00I feel pity for the poor boy...I feel pity for the poor boy...Manjunath Shevgoorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05209336156354784863noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30484615.post-40745346119626193302008-03-10T00:12:00.000-05:002008-03-10T00:12:00.000-05:00:) Thanks! But who's to say he was sweet? This is ...:) Thanks! But who's to say he was sweet? This is just his version, understandably biased in his favour. :)<BR/><BR/>..because no one is inherently evil. >:)..so believe I.Rachhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09791351711056663599noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30484615.post-66827152108606440872008-03-09T23:32:00.000-05:002008-03-09T23:32:00.000-05:00hahaha! So, he was a sweet boy afterall! :)nice on...hahaha! So, he was a sweet boy afterall! :)<BR/>nice one...Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com